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Sparkle Berriy by Berriy

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Dadanana critique time!

So. First of all, I see sooo much improvement since when I started watching you. Your colouring has gotten a lot neater, for one thing. I found that it used to be a tad messy, but now like WOW it looks really great. I like how the colours are paler, it fits your style of drawing. Her hair looks nice too, all those colours uvu

My suggestion to you is that you should deepen your shading more. Like, her hair behind her head and under the hat, and some shadows on the shirt under the scarf, ya know?

And one more thing, there's a little bit of white between Berriy's legs you didn't make transparent. And that's it~!
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Berriy Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wahhhhhh my first critique! <33

Hnnnng really? c: //I never really had a coloring stye before either OTL//
Her hair took soo long to color! XD

^^ I was going to deepen it, but I just wanted to actually try out the style of coloring first c: I was so afraid I was going to mess up! XD lol

Wahh I noticed not too long ago! When I saw it I was like :iconragemanplz:

Thanks so much for critiqueing [spelling?], Beavy-Chan!! <3 :iconkokorox:
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moonkuu Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, it did turn out great!
That makes sense, I understand. Like, when I got my white pen, I didn't want to go too crazy with it.
You're very welcome, dearie!
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Berriy Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yayz! Thanksssss~~~
^^ But~!! Now I'm gonna start shading mnore (But it's really hardddd)
:D <33333
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