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Commission for Xxi-luv-applesxX by Sunnimi

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All this improvement Sunny like whoa seriously.
First of all, the colours are a lot brighter than your first deviations. Did you find a program to saturate them or are you just using better pencils?
Also, I like seeing that you're experimenting with shadows and highlights. Shading adds quite a bit of depth to your drawings^^
As for the things you should improve on...um, I think that maybe you should try to be a bit neater with your colouring? For example, there are lines of red from the character's shirt on the white stripe of the top under it. I'd be a bit more careful with that if I were you, and always make sure your pencils are sharp. Try experimenting with anatomy, too. I know that chibis have highly unrealistic body shapes, but maybe take a look at other chibi drawings, see where there are curves and such.
Overall, I'm very impressed, Sunny dear! You're improving so much so fast! When I get the points I'll definitely commission you for one of these adorable chibis~ :iconallmyloveplz:
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Sunnimi Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you!I am using crayons actually,not pencils,so that contributes to the messyness.I try not to make my chibis too curvy,I am experimenting still at the moment,I might try a bit more curvy ones next time though.I wish I could sharpen my crayons though >.<
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moonkuu Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh, I see, haha. I think you should just be able to use a regular sharpener for your crayons, actually. I've done that before, but it was a long time ago...
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Sunnimi Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I tried once and it broke my sharpener >.<
I was going to erase the red marks on the shirt in GIMP but it wouldn't let me erase >.<
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moonkuu Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Umm...try using the eyedropper tool to select the white colour, and then use the painbrush tool and paint over the red.
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Sunnimi Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know...I tried
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moonkuu Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh well >< it still looks good!
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Sunnimi Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
xD
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